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A Reason Why You Don't Piss Off the Quiet Girl

WARNING! This story contains VORE if you are offended by it please do not read it (obviously). These are characters I made up, but they are based on people who actually do tease girls in real life. I just smirk evilly in class when I think of them getting their "rewards" >:3
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An innocent girl sat in her second period algebra 1 class, twirling her pencil when the guy who sat next to her came in.

"Heeeeyyy there best buddy!" He said in the sarcastic tone that made you know he didn't really think of you as a best buddy. The girl ignored him. "Aww don't you wanna talk? What a bitch you are." The girl continued ignoring him. Then the guy's friend came in and sat down in the other open seat next to the girl. The first boy's attention was distracted from the entrance of the second's and he began talking to him. This was awkward for the girl because they talked about drinking, smoking, sex and how hot other girls were. They also teased the other girls in the classroom. Another boy joined in teasing the girl and her classmates. They were getting on the girl's nerves until finally she snapped.

"Sutoppu uotchi, jikan no teishi!" The girl muttered. Suddenly the world turned a dullish gray color. Everything except the girl that is. Little did these stupid testosterone junkies know, the girl was Melody, an Owner. She Owned a magnificent belt and ring which supplied the magical power to her imaginings, in other words, wearing the belt and ring, she could do anything. She turned to face the first boy. His name was Jared. "Murasakiiro no kasai ni watashi no ishi wo mageru." She held up her fist and let her ring emit a soft light purple fire. She then proceeded to hit Jared in the arm, harder than she would a normal person.

Jared regained color and moved, he seemed slightly shocked at the gray world at first, but then clutched his head as a dizzy spell over came him. During the dizzy spell Melody watched, smirking evilly; a smirk which widened when Jared started shrinking rapidly. Jared stopped shrinking when he was only two and a half inches tall. Relieved from his dizzy spell he looked up to find a huge Melody! Surprised, he fell over. Gently Melody pinched Jared's torso between her thumb and fore finger, lifting him off the chair he used to sit on. She placed him gently on the table before turning to face his friend. His friend's name was Joey. "Murasakiiro no kasai ni no ishi wo mageru watashi."
The purple fire glowed from her ring again, and she repeated the performance she gave Jared until both Joey and Jared were on the table together, both two and a half inches tall.

She frowned as she remembered the third boy, whose name was Vincent. Again she repeated the act of shrinking and placing the two and a half inch tall boy down with the others. By this point the other two had gotten over their initial shock and had started asking questions, this woke the third boy up from his shock and before Melody knew it she had questions flying at her, thick as gun fire.

"Stop!" She said loudly. The boys stopped, something primal inside them telling them they'd best not mess with this person. Finally, one boy was brave enough to ask, "What have you done to us and our class?" Melody just smiled at the boys.
"Why I've stopped time and shrunk you three! I thought that much was obvious!" She said politely.

"But why?" Jared piped up.

"Because I feel like you three need a time out. You're being very rude to us girls and I don't appreciate it." Melody said in the same tone of voice, but something about it made the boys shiver.

"Oh yeah? What's a stupid time out gonna do to make us stop huh? You can't do anything!" Vincent was getting brave, only a time out? What a lame idea! She stopped time for this?

"Well since you're so eager to find out, why don't I send you to your time out first." Melody said, picking up the tiny boy between her thumb and index finger, before changing her mind and picking him up by the back of the shirt. A sense of dread came over Vincent as he was lifted up to Melody's face level and then beyond it. Melody tipped her head back to look right at Vincent, dangling pitifully above her head, before she opened her mouth wide. Vincent's eyes opened with terror as he could see into Melody's mouth and now knew what Melody meant by "time out".

"But---but I thought you said I was getting a time out!!" He shouted.

"Oh you are, but there's no better place I can think of to keep you under control then right here." She said patting her stomach.

"No please no don't eat me!" Vincent screamed helplessly as Melody released her grip on his shirt and he plunged into her dark, wet mouth. As soon as he made contact with her tongue Melody snapped her mouth shut. Panicking Vincent begged forgiveness,
"Please! I'm sorry! I won't ever tease another girl as long as I live!" He promised frantically as Melody's tongue squashed him to her palate and started rubbing him to get him good and soaked in saliva. "If---if you don't let me go this instant I'll kill you!" He threatened. A low chuckle reverberated inside her mouth before Melody tipped her head back, letting Vincent's head hit the soft flesh of her throat, which instantly constricted around him. With this sudden movement Vincent could only kick and scream in horror, his head and shoulders lodged inside Melody's throat. His kicking and squirming stimulated some irresistible urge to swallow in Melody, and even though she still wanted to feel Vincent squirming in her throat, she swallowed. Vincent screamed louder as he felt the muscles ripple around him and pull him deeper into Melody's throat until she swallowed again, this time his fate was sealed for sure as he squirmed down her throat. He fought desperately, but his movements only made him slide faster until he felt pressure at his head, which released to allow him entrance to her stomach. He slid down a slope until he stopped at the bottom of her stomach. Instantly he tried to stand up, only to fail and fall back down. He hadn't expected the floor to be so soft and squishy. It was rather hard to walk on, not to mention there was a stifling heat and rank smell that made him nauseous. He tried crawling to the nearest wall and beating on it, trying to do some kind of damage to his captor. All he got in response was a few pats from the outside, which was enough to send him flying backwards into a pool of stomach goo, which he didn't really want identified.

Outside, Melody patted her stomach enjoying the maddened squirms of her captive, licking her lips to get the last of his taste off of them. She looked down to find Joey and Jared, both of whom seemed terrified enough to wet themselves.

"You--- you ate Vincent!" Jared pointed a shaking finger at her.

"Yes, yes I did, and he was tasty!" Melody said, licking her lips again.

"You monster! What are you going to do to us?!" Joey shouted in fear.

"Well I have a few ideas." Melody said smirking. She put her hand down to where the two boys stood, nudging them with her fingers to get them on her palm. They were terrified of their fate, and just sat on her hand, hugging each other. Holding them, Melody got out what was like a broad popsicle stick from her backpack, along with two stands of sorts. She placed the stands far enough a part and placed the stick between the two before placing both young men on the stick and sliding her head underneath the stick between the two stands. "Fight, first to fall loses." Melody said before she opened her mouth wide and waited for one best friend to push the other to his apparent death.

Gulping the two boys stared at each other for a long moment before Jared lunged at Joey.

"What are you doing?!" Joey asked in surprise.

"Saving myself! I'm sorry Joey!" Jared replied.

"I'm not going to lose to you!" Joey screamed, terrified of death. Soon both boys were wrestling on the wobbly stick, both a pretty even match for each other, but finally Jared gave out and fell from the stick and into Melody's mouth. Quickly Melody shut her mouth and slid out from under the stand, pressing Jared to her palate so he wouldn't fall into her throat just yet.

Jared screamed and kicked uselessly against the tongue which pressed him to the bumpy palate. However, he was still tired from his wrestling match with Joey, and could only manage a few useless punches and kicks before he gave up and went limp as the soft tongue got him soaked to the bone in spit. Apparently Melody didn't like him to stop moving so she tilted her head warningly, which pumped some life into Jared. He screamed pitifully and vainly until Melody tilted her head back and let Jared's feet sink into her throat. Playful, Melody decided to try something. She forced her throat to relax enough to let Jared slide in fully, but not enough to trigger an instinctive swallow. Jared slid more, then stopped in the hot confining throat. Adrenaline was coursing through his body now, putting more fight into him. He kicked and squirmed and tried to get out, but he was stuck firmly in place by the throat muscles. Then he felt and odd sensation coming from his front. Melody was rubbing at him from the outside of her throat! Jared burst out sobbing, knowing nothing would stop this monster, but nonetheless he kicked and squirmed until he felt himself slid further. Melody was doing something odd, she was relaxing and tensing her throat muscles oddly, but every time she relaxed the muscles he slid further into the confines of her throat. He reached a place where Melody couldn't get him further without swallowing, so she gave in and gulped Jared down. Jared kicks and cried the whole way down until he tumbled into her stomach and bumped into Vincent.

Vincent had given up on trying to get out, he knew now that he was royally screwed. But when Jared plunged into the stomach to join him he instantly felt more fight rising in him, but first he had to console Jared enough to get him to stop crying. Jared had curled up into a fetal position and was sobbing uncontrollably. It was up to Vincent to try and calm him down.

Joey just stared blankly as he watched Melody swallow his friend alive. He could faintly hear Jared's screams and he quickly looked away, feeling guilty that he had pushed his friend to his death. He felt tears welling up in his eyes but he forced them back, not wanting to give this monster the satisfaction of seeing him cry. Apparently Melody had finished her evil task, because she spoke.

"Oh he was delicious too! And he squirmed delightfully!" Said as she rubbed her stomach. Joey was sickened, how could this girl sit there and eat her own classmates without a hint of guilt?

"What're you gonna do to me?" He asked quietly, wanting his fate confirmed by the monster who now controlled it.

"Why, you're next of course!" Joey stifled a hiccupping sob and took a deep breath. Just as he was exhaling Melody picked him up by his shirt and popped him up to his torso in her mouth. Joey wasn't ready for this and kicked and screamed, his legs hitting her fingers and lips, but doing no damage. He was scared, his body was inside the mouth of a monster for god's sake! He beat his fists wildly, feeling them hit something hard. He gulped as he realized he was hitting her teeth. Then the terrifying realization that all Melody had to do was bite, and his life would end made him scream horrifically. But Melody had no intention of offing her prey so quickly, as she slurped his legs inside her mouth.

Now fully inside her mouth Joey was freer to try and do some damage, however every time his fist or leg hit something it'd bounce off uselessly. Melody had waited for a while, taking her time with her last prey. Finally she started licking the little body, getting him ready for his trip, and enjoying his taste at the same time. Finally Melody tipped her head back and gulped, rubbing her neck as she felt the bulge that was Joey slide down past her collar bone and then plop into her stomach. Sighing she rubbed her stomach peacefully in her grey world, enjoying the peace brought on by nothing moving.

Inside Melody's stomach Jared was clinging to Vincent like a helpless little koala bear when Joey joined them.

"Damn it! We're screwed!" Vincent said. "Can you please come here and try to calm this guy down? He's been this way ever since he got here." He said, motioning to pathetic little Jared. However Joey wasn't listening, he was too busy beating at the walls like a crazed animal to hear a word Vincent had just said. "I tried that Joey! It won't work. We can only sit here and wait for Melody's system to digest us." Vincent said, mumbling the last line and wincing.

"It has to work! It's got to! I won't sit here and be digested by this bitch!" He screamed loudly enough for Melody to faintly hear him. She laughed.

"Ha! You think you're going to be digested?! How stupid ARE you?" Melody said while rubbing at her stomach.

"What do you mean?" Joey shouted back.

"It's got to be at least twenty minutes since I swallowed Vincent right? My system would have already gotten to work on him if I was going to digest him." Melody explained in a tone that made it sound as if it was obvious.

"Then what're you going to do to us? Now that you've eaten us." Vincent shouted it this time.

"I plan to keep you there for a while, and seeing as time has stopped for everyone but us, we have ALL the time in the world." Melody said cruelly.

"How long is "a while"?" Joey asked.

"Hmm probably two or three days."

"What?!" Joey and Vincent screamed.

"You can't possibly be serious!" Vincent screamed.

"Oh but I am." Melody smirked. "Now since its useless trying to get out, why don't you just enjoy yourselves? I can imagine it's very soft and warm in there." Melody laughed evilly and left unpleasant shudders through the three boys.

"Well, there isn't really much we can do is there?" Joey said, trying to walk over to the other two, but failing as he wasn't used the walking on flesh that conformed to his feet every time he stepped.

"No there isn't." Vincent agreed. "I hate to admit it, but she's right. It is pleasant in here, if you take away the smell and slime, it'd be very nice." Vincent said sheepishly.
"I suppose." Joey said. "Well we might as well calm this one down before we do anything else." Joey said jabbing a thumb at Jared. They spent most of the rest of the day consoling Jared and calming him down enough so they could sleep, but when they finally did fall asleep, Melody smirked and just leaned back in her chair, rubbing her stomach triumphantly.
Stupid title box >3> the full title is: Why you don't piss of the quiet girl

and before you start questions YES this IS MY FIRST VORE STORY! so sorry for the crappiness >3> and again if you are offended by vore please don't comment you will be reported as abuse and harrassment as you have been warned.
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Wow! What a really cool story. :) absolutely loved every minute.